This didn't have much of a storyline and the animation looked a bit rushed. I like your style even though it is a bit sketchy ;)
This didn't have much of a storyline and the animation looked a bit rushed. I like your style even though it is a bit sketchy ;)
thanks, at first I was just being fast, but then when I tried to clean it up I had a really difficult time making my lines look better. Idk
Haha, I found that very funny! xD One thing that would make this complete is if you improved your drawing skills. Other than that, this was really good. You're a true comedian! Maybe you could work with an artist which could animate most of it for you so you can work on the voice acting. I'm giving you 3.5 stars. If you had better artistic skills, I would have given you a 4/4.5 :)
Keep going, and good luck in the future!
Thanks heaps! This is my first attempt at drawing really, I know it's more of a slideshow than an animation but I thought I'd be able to get some feedback on here :D So thank you very much for the constructive criticism! I'm going to attempt to improve my drawing skills a lot more before I try any proper animation, but in the mean time I'd love to work with other animators much more skilled than myself. It'd definitely help me learn more about this field!
Thanks again!
I'm sorry but this lacked any sign of a storyline or joke/pun. The voice acting was below average. It looks like you haven't put much effort in to it at all :L
Next time, spend more time on your project. That's all I have to say.
So the one who made a cool movie says I'm terrible? Watch my other movies and then you'll change your mind.
I thought it was kind of funny :) I like your style aswell. 3.5 stars for you! c:
I see you converted it from mp4. And I'm guessing that's why it's pretty bad quality and without a play button. :L
I love the style you animate with and I would like to see more of your work in the future but, this lacked a proper storyline or joke/pun. You should spend some more time on it instead of just half a day. Other than that, I like it! :)
Thanks for the feedback! It was more of a special way of saying Happy Christmas to those close to me rather than being funny, even though I'm not really a funny person anyway.
Le fin~
xD
Awesome, as usual ;)
Hey there, my name is Ross Martin, but you probably know me better by my internet alias, "MangoSwah". I live on my PC. When I'm not at school, you'll find me surfing the web or drawing/animating.
Age 26, Male
Student
United Kingdom
Joined on 12/24/12