MangoSwahHD's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Eddsworld Animation Test]

Really nice work :)

Yeah, mp4 often messes with the colours unfortunately aha. Apart from that, the animation was great. The lip-syncing in particular was superb. I can't wait to see more of your own content in the future, because I definitely believe you have the potential to make really great things!

FaKanza responds:

Thanks I appreciate the kind words. I love doing lipsync I believe it's what I'm best at, at the moment as well as making clean lines. I have some scripts written for parodies and things like that nothing like an ongoing series since I'm not great at creative writing. However I do have some stuff planned for this year, so fingers crossed!

[Toasty]

The animation is good, but nothing special. For a short, snappy idea - it's great, but I feel it is missing something. Great work though.

Gerkinman responds:

Cheers, it was originally designed to loop forever but for the newgrounds release I threw in a little ending.

[Ralph-It Ralph!]

Awesome. I like your new style ;) You're getting there, Connor! I didn't really get the joke though :L

CNNR777 responds:

Thanks man :) Yeah the joke is pretty basic "Ralph" is another word for vomiting :P This was more just an excuse to try something different :D
Thanks again!

[LL-NaggyCookie]

Try voice acting. It's a lot better than this Microsoft SAM crap xD And spend more time on the art. I'm suprised you got this high of a score from everybody else! 0_0 Keep working on it. You'll get better. But don't post stuff like this to Newgrounds.

SavvyOverDog responds:

Easier said than done.

[The Glowy Show intro]

I love the cartoon style and the animation was good but, it was too short :L

MonsterGlowy responds:

yeah i know its just an intro i will have actual episodes soon :D thanks for the feed back (:

[[kk] Kitty Grabber]

This didn't have much of a storyline and the animation looked a bit rushed. I like your style even though it is a bit sketchy ;)

turbophysics responds:

thanks, at first I was just being fast, but then when I tried to clean it up I had a really difficult time making my lines look better. Idk

[Art Bastard New Years Eve]

Haha, I found that very funny! xD One thing that would make this complete is if you improved your drawing skills. Other than that, this was really good. You're a true comedian! Maybe you could work with an artist which could animate most of it for you so you can work on the voice acting. I'm giving you 3.5 stars. If you had better artistic skills, I would have given you a 4/4.5 :)
Keep going, and good luck in the future!

CNNR777 responds:

Thanks heaps! This is my first attempt at drawing really, I know it's more of a slideshow than an animation but I thought I'd be able to get some feedback on here :D So thank you very much for the constructive criticism! I'm going to attempt to improve my drawing skills a lot more before I try any proper animation, but in the mean time I'd love to work with other animators much more skilled than myself. It'd definitely help me learn more about this field!
Thanks again!

[te]

I'm sorry but this lacked any sign of a storyline or joke/pun. The voice acting was below average. It looks like you haven't put much effort in to it at all :L
Next time, spend more time on your project. That's all I have to say.

Alphaman responds:

So the one who made a cool movie says I'm terrible? Watch my other movies and then you'll change your mind.