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A good start. Try working more on the lip-syncing. For me personally, I feel the mouth movements are one of the key features between making a good animation or a bad one. As I said, a good start, just keep at it buddy!

The animation itself is brilliant. Really smooth and flawless. Although, the quality of the image and the shortness of the animation stopped me from rating 5. I take into account that this is only Experimental. Great work overall.

Dude, this should be Daily 1st Place, let alone 3rd! I really like your style, similar to mine in a way, but obviously yours is better ;) Nice work man.

The animation is great. Can't wait to see the final thing once it's out. One thing, I was slightly disappointed with the quality of the audio.

Unfortunatly, a continuous animated loop won't get you great ratings on Newgrounds. Although this is somewhat of a music video, it lacks a story, the animation at times is choppy, but I guess it is pretty well animated to some extent. Try taking more time to vary the animation, to make it more interesting.

Try spending more time drawing the characters. Since they don't move or change all that much, it's important to get them right. Next time, work more on the lip-syncing as well. If you can get both of those things sorted, you're going somewhere.

The animation is good, but nothing special. For a short, snappy idea - it's great, but I feel it is missing something. Great work though.

Gerkinman responds:

Cheers, it was originally designed to loop forever but for the newgrounds release I threw in a little ending.

Nicely animated man.

You don't see many movies with real life in them on here. Nice job!

I don't really understand the concept of this animation, and it is extremely short :L

Hey there, my name is Ross Martin, but you probably know me better by my internet alias, "MangoSwah". I live on my PC. When I'm not at school, you'll find me surfing the web or drawing/animating.

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Joined on 12/24/12

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